The trees in his yard looked like something straight out of a fairy tale. Gnarled branches that were bent and twisted in odd and different shapes. Bushes that he had sculpted into triangles and squares and round concoctions. I always walked to school and went past his house every morning. Sometimes on grey and foggy mornings I imagined I was in the forest. And my heart beat faster at what imaginary thing I might met in his yard. I slipped in and out of the trees and bushes with ease, always aware I could get caught and get scolded. But I had to do it anyhow..
I was fascinated with his yard because of the uniqueness of it . There was a nest of rabbits in the hollow stump of an old oak tree by his shed. It was covered with moss and I could see the Momma bunny running back and forth in the yard looking for food. Then one day I saw the baby bunnies come out. They hopped across the lawn with new feet and wondering eyes.
I was enchanted. I never got close to them because I didn't want to scare them. But everyday I would catch small glimpses of them on the lawn trying to find their way in the world.
The old man's house was clad in brown shingles. And sometimes I saw him peak out from behind the threadbare curtain that hung listlessly at his window.
I had heard his wife had passed many years before and after that he had become a recluse. I often wondered if he had children..If he had friends..
But I never found out. We moved after my 4Th grade year and I never walked that way again. But I did drive by there the other day.
His beautiful bushes were gone.. The trees cut down. But the stump was still there. And I think I saw a Momma rabbit hopping across the lawn.
~Nita~
sounds like a piece of fairy tale :)
ReplyDeletehopefully you are well Nita <3
Delila
Love that little piece of life. I wrote a similar story about an elderly woman I used to live near. She had beautiful flowers and a cuckoo clock that chimed the hour. I often wonder what happened to her. I should drive by the house one of these days and see if it is still there.
ReplyDeleteLovely story!
Nita Jo
Great writing Nita!! I was there in the bushes With you!!lolol.....Happy night sweetie!!hughughugs
ReplyDeletedelila: good to hear from you dear friend..i am not myself these days. still looking for my place in the world now that john is gone.
ReplyDeletei wander aimlessly many days..i hope i get stronger as days go by.
by the way it was a fairy place..love nita
Nita Jo: I am glad you liked it..I have not read your post on the elderly woman but will try to.
ReplyDeletefondly, nita
Donna: Thank you..I hope you are doing good. I think of you everyday.
ReplyDeletexoxo Nita
wow Nita! Such a way with words! I really love the way you told this! Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving such sweet comments. Your friendship means a lot to me!
ReplyDeleteIf we went thrifting together we'd probably both go for the same things!
Robin, you are right,we probably would pick out the same stuff! I like all the stuff you pick out while thrifting.
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for the compliment on my writing. Love Nita
what a sweet childhood memory to share ~
ReplyDeleteI thought you where writting another short storey, I loved it how you captured everything in it.
ReplyDeleteLove ya and think about often...
HUG'S Annette
Joni: Thank you..It was a good memory. xoxo Nita
ReplyDeleteAnnette: You always make me feel good..That was an actual place though. The old man always had the neatest yard. I never saw him outside though. He must have worked in his yard in the evenings.
ReplyDeletexoxo Nita
i love the way you write, nita....the words used to describe everyday things and make them come alive.....and paint a picture that we can enter and spend time in.....
ReplyDeleteyou have a special gift.....maybe you need to send some of your stories to publications.....you never know dear friend....what is in store with that gift.
hugs,
kimberly
Poignantly written
ReplyDeleteYou have a way of making everyday life feel magical Nita! I could feel myself hold my breath thinking about getting caught. Pure magic!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Nita, love your detail.
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Rose
What a perfectly executed essay...really lovely.
ReplyDeleteSandi
Nita,
ReplyDeleteI posted a comment the first of the week...but I guess it didn't take...
love this story...
as a matter of fact I love all of your stories...
Your lovely prose is filled with magical, fantasy and beautiful word images that fill our senses.
ReplyDeleteYour story keeps not only his yard, but his memory continual.