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Sunday, August 17, 2008

The trees in his yard looked like something straight out of a fairy tale. Gnarled branches that were bent and twisted in odd and different shapes. Bushes that he had sculpted into triangles and squares and round concoctions. I always walked to school and went past his house every morning. Sometimes on grey and foggy mornings I imagined I was in the forest. And my heart beat faster at what imaginary thing I might met in his yard. I slipped in and out of the trees and bushes with ease, always aware I could get caught and get scolded. But I had to do it anyhow..

I was fascinated with his yard because of the uniqueness of it . There was a nest of rabbits in the hollow stump of an old oak tree by his shed. It was covered with moss and I could see the Momma bunny running back and forth in the yard looking for food. Then one day I saw the baby bunnies come out. They hopped across the lawn with new feet and wondering eyes.

I was enchanted. I never got close to them because I didn't want to scare them. But everyday I would catch small glimpses of them on the lawn trying to find their way in the world.



The old man's house was clad in brown shingles. And sometimes I saw him peak out from behind the threadbare curtain that hung listlessly at his window.

I had heard his wife had passed many years before and after that he had become a recluse. I often wondered if he had children..If he had friends..
But I never found out. We moved after my 4Th grade year and I never walked that way again. But I did drive by there the other day.

His beautiful bushes were gone.. The trees cut down. But the stump was still there. And I think I saw a Momma rabbit hopping across the lawn.

~Nita~

19 comments:

  1. sounds like a piece of fairy tale :)

    hopefully you are well Nita <3

    Delila

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  2. Love that little piece of life. I wrote a similar story about an elderly woman I used to live near. She had beautiful flowers and a cuckoo clock that chimed the hour. I often wonder what happened to her. I should drive by the house one of these days and see if it is still there.

    Lovely story!
    Nita Jo

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  3. Great writing Nita!! I was there in the bushes With you!!lolol.....Happy night sweetie!!hughughugs

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  4. delila: good to hear from you dear friend..i am not myself these days. still looking for my place in the world now that john is gone.
    i wander aimlessly many days..i hope i get stronger as days go by.
    by the way it was a fairy place..love nita

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  5. Nita Jo: I am glad you liked it..I have not read your post on the elderly woman but will try to.
    fondly, nita

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  6. Donna: Thank you..I hope you are doing good. I think of you everyday.
    xoxo Nita

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  7. wow Nita! Such a way with words! I really love the way you told this! Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving such sweet comments. Your friendship means a lot to me!
    If we went thrifting together we'd probably both go for the same things!

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  8. Robin, you are right,we probably would pick out the same stuff! I like all the stuff you pick out while thrifting.
    And thank you for the compliment on my writing. Love Nita

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  9. what a sweet childhood memory to share ~

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  10. I thought you where writting another short storey, I loved it how you captured everything in it.
    Love ya and think about often...
    HUG'S Annette

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  11. Joni: Thank you..It was a good memory. xoxo Nita

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  12. Annette: You always make me feel good..That was an actual place though. The old man always had the neatest yard. I never saw him outside though. He must have worked in his yard in the evenings.
    xoxo Nita

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  13. i love the way you write, nita....the words used to describe everyday things and make them come alive.....and paint a picture that we can enter and spend time in.....
    you have a special gift.....maybe you need to send some of your stories to publications.....you never know dear friend....what is in store with that gift.
    hugs,
    kimberly

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  14. You have a way of making everyday life feel magical Nita! I could feel myself hold my breath thinking about getting caught. Pure magic!

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  15. Beautiful Nita, love your detail.
    Hugs,
    Rose

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  16. What a perfectly executed essay...really lovely.
    Sandi

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  17. Nita,
    I posted a comment the first of the week...but I guess it didn't take...
    love this story...
    as a matter of fact I love all of your stories...

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  18. Your lovely prose is filled with magical, fantasy and beautiful word images that fill our senses.

    Your story keeps not only his yard, but his memory continual.

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