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Sunday, October 25, 2009

Song of the Siren...

I am in love with Neptune..The God of the Sea

He is in love with me

I found him hard and broken by the water's edge

His brown chocolate eyes warmed by the sun.. but so lost..

"Mermaid what is your name? He barked

"My name is Ethereal" I whispered... my heart in my throat

"Why do you come to me everyday and leave me messages?" He asked with anger in his voice

"Because I love you..I am not like the rest. I don't go away. I stay.

And when you are angry with yourself I watch and think of ways to make you better."

I looked at my fin as I spoke..flipping it in the green blue waters..Scared I had said too much.


"I see you watch me.."he said quietly.


"I am broken Girl...Maybe you can't fix me..I have been broke a long time. So long."
He lifted his head to the wind and tears coursed down his beautiful face.

I swam to him and cupped his face in my hands..and he lowered his head to meet my lips..Salty tears from his eyes filled my mouth. And i drank them ...

He and I love each other..Neptune and I

by Nita Barrow- Zimmerman

"My heart sighs from the sorrow"...Neptune whispers

8 comments:

  1. Very good Nita
    What have you been up to lately?
    Drop me a line. How is Elizabeth doing?
    Hugs
    God Bless You
    Patti

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  2. Really good Miz Nita!! More More!!hughugs

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  3. I love it........sorry havent been by a awhile, but my brother died unexpectedly Monday night, just been numb.

    Love you~
    Annette

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  4. Dear Nita,

    Just wanted to stop by and let you know I am thinking about you. I hope you are OK. Sending you lots of love and hugs.

    Your friend,

    Sandy

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  5. Nita, I just love your writing. I think it should all be collected together and put in a book.

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  6. Just checking in, I hope you and Elizabeth are okay.

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  7. I hope you are OK. Sending you lots of love and hugs.

    Work from home India

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  8. Just wanted to stop by and let you know I am thinking about you. I hope you are OK.

    Wagyu Steak

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